Horror Stories feedback

Hello there

Here are some of the errors I have noticed while marking your work. Just read the sentences and correct them...

• When I seen the person, I shaked. I don't wanted the man see me.

• "How are you ?" I screamed.

• Suddenly the man was staring at me during two minutes. I had scare. He looked me. I was scary.  I did'nt knowed what I do.

• Then a big noise affraid me. I can't found my way. The zombie grasped my leg.

• I thank during one minute.

Comments

[Chanel CHARLES]

My opinion: I think this is a good thing because we don't need some materials like papers, pencil for write, etc ...

[sousou]

I think teh high tech is very good because a little children and the parents like this and would that.