Here are some of the errors I have noticed while marking your work. Just read the sentences and correct them...
• When I seen the person, I shaked. I don't wanted the man see me.
• "How are you ?" I screamed.
• Suddenly the man was staring at me during two minutes. I had scare. He looked me. I was scary. I did'nt knowed what I do.
• Then a big noise affraid me. I can't found my way. The zombie grasped my leg.
• I thank during one minute.