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18 février 2014 2 18 /02 /février /2014 13:52

Hello there

 

Here are some of the errors I have noticed while marking your work. Just read the sentences and correct them...

 

• When I seen the person, I shaked. I don't wanted the man see me.

 

• "How are you ?" I screamed.

 

• Suddenly the man was staring at me during two minutes. I had scare. He looked me. I was scary.  I did'nt knowed what I do.

 

• Then a big noise affraid me. I can't found my way. The zombie grasped my leg.

 

• I thank during one minute.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Chanel CHARLES 18/03/2014 09:35

My opinion: I think this is a good thing because we don't need some materials like papers, pencil for write, etc ...

sousou 18/03/2014 09:33

I think teh high tech is very good because a little children and the parents like this and would that.

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