Term LELE: snappy Jack Kerouac style portraits

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Imagine you have met these people while travelling: give a quick Jack Kerouac style portrait of three of them, about 30 to 50 words each, no more. Think about their eyes, their look, their clothes, their cheeks, their hair, the position of their mouth, their possible age, their possible personal story...Use as many consecutive adjectives as you can, but most importantly talk about your first impression of them and how you felt about them on second thoughts, after looking at them closely. 

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Comments

[Adrien Lecheval]

This old man in the bus looked sad. He was watching me but I was just listening music. His looks was scared, like if I killed all his family. It was quite hurting. His skin was wrinkly, like a desert without sand, and life. He looked like very miserable.

An other guy on wheelchair, with a strange smile, which could means "hey bro, how are you ?" like "don't worry, you will not suffer to much whatever I do on you, but after I will eat you" but I think the first one is nearer his way of thinking, or I hope so.

Oh, and this other guy who looked completly pertified, like he killed his own parents and children after his wife. He looked quite seek too, his eyes were the last thing you would seen before your death, and he was shaking, maybe he was cold but in august ? Very strange guy... He should stop certain substances.

[Mr Pink]

This old man in the bus looked sad. He was watching me but I was just listening music. His look was scary, as if I had killed all his family. It was quite shocking. His skin was wrinkly, like a desert without sand, and life. He looked very miserable.

[Eloise BRAGUIER]

(picture 5) the first person is a man who look like a rich people but unlike rich people he seems really dark. The blackness in him eyes represent him rage or him scared. He seems run away something. he escape of person or death. A life of him is a dangerous life. I many years he fought the strengths demonic and he is became serious and cold with stranger .

(picture 1) the second person is a young man from the city. him distant smile reveal probably a life on street. He's dresses with a cap and many clothes it must be beacause he comes from the north, where he leave him family. however this global look it's simple so his owner too.

(picture 4) This person is a student who is reserved and shy. with her bag she seem sad with a look empty. She have looking desappointed certainely beacause her life was full of problems: with her parents or with her boyfriend. Nevertheless she's really sympatic and she not consider problem or differencies of people. she's verry cool with strange people for other.

[Mr Pi]

(picture 5) the first person is a man who looks like a rich person but unlike rich people he seems really dark. The blackness in his eyes represent his rage or his scare. He seems to be running away something. He escapes from someone or from death. His life is a dangerous life. I many years he fought the demonic strengths and he became serious and cold with strangers .

[Ledenvic Annwenn]

The first one is an old man who has the wrinkled face. He seems to be old even very old. He has the empty look and the face without expression. We can imagine that this person lived many things in its life and to work hard. This old man in the air to be a generous and very kind man.

The second person is a girl about 17 years old who is in a bus. She carries a hat and in earphones. This girl can look like in she other girl however imports only she looks sad. She is alone.

And the last one is a handicaped young man who is in wheelchair in a bus. He has approximately around thirty years. He carries a cap and smiles. In spite of sound handicap this young man countered happy.

[Mr Pi]

The first one is an old wrinkly man. He seems to be old even very old. He has an empty look and an expressionless face. We can imagine that this person lived many things in his life and he worked hard. This old man seems to be a generous and very kind man

[Daniel Océane]

The first I’ve met during my trip was a strange boy, a little bit complexed I think because he was wearing a lot of clothes like if he wanted to hide himself and at the first sight I asked myself if he was a boy or a girl but he seemed nice after all.

The second person was a really old man who seemed so sad and it’s like he worked really hard all his life but he didn’t seem to be rich so I think he was working as a farmer or something like that but he’s a generous and kind man when you speak with him. His profund wrinkles are the proof that he passed through a lot of things in his life.

The last person was a 17 or 18 years old girl who was wearing a hat and headphones. She has clear blond hair and looks like any teenagers but she seemed lost in her own mind and she didn’t talk a lot. I think she was a little bit sad or just tired because she seemed nice, she just wanted to be alone for a while I presume.

[L'AOT Elise]

There was this old man whose face had probably been marked by long years of hard work. He was looking through the bus window's and I don't know why but I felt so bad for him maybe because of his look full of distress who shouted silently « HELP ».

In front of me, this teenager, a blond-haired girl. I'm pretty sure that she had been bullied or something like this because she was looking so closed-off and heartbroken. Actually I think she was hiding under her large wool hat and her headphones which were making her a little bit less insecure.

Close to me, a creepy guy. Obviously a drug addict. Looking apparently in lack of heroine or whatever, shaking and sweaty, his face as white as snow. This weirdo was highly agitated, delusional and of course full of crap.